June 06, 2011

A Haiku - 16 And A Photo Tweet



As she nervously rambled on about the detergent sales dip in their branch; 
he pondered guiltily over their break-up's effect on her.







She stood on the ground /
Pride and grace personified /
Nature's porcelain dream //


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12 comments:

Anonymous said...

Your haiku is so beautiful, the vision of a true lady

Grandma's Goulash said...

I've seen a couple or romantic takes on this one, but this is the first romantic breakup.

Of course, I'm hoping that she's distracted by her new love interest - the other guy in the photo, perhaps?

Lovely haiku as well.

Anyes said...

Nice ones :-)

I really enjoy the Haiku

bttrflyscar said...

very moving.

Sonia Lal said...

unique take on this pic!

Pat said...

That's why office romances are usually not a good idea!

Beautiful haiku!

Both are excellent.

Susan Fobes said...

If he is wondering about the break up then he must be the dumper...Nice take this week!

Lisa Ricard Claro said...

Well, he has a conscience. I'll give him points for that. :) Nice MF!

Bikram said...

BAD MAN...

I hope he gets up and does soemthing to help her now ..

Bikram's

Jenny said...

Haikus are so challenging but you really rocked this one.

Olive Tree said...

"nature's porcelain dream", I like that, showing fragility of the strong persona she tries to show on the outside. A wonderful haiku.

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

superb job.

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